Some people believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any job they want. Others feel that men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs which are nor suitable for women.
What is your opinion ?
Many believe that men are women are born differently and possess different abilities. Consequently, there are some jobs that should be done by men alone and some jobs that should be the domain of women. There are, however, many who disagree with previous system of thoughts and believe that men and women are created same; hence, both genders should be able do any job they want. There are obvious flaws in both system of thoughts. Nevertheless, I believe women should be able to do any job they want, provided that they meet the required criteria.
First, we see women in almost every field, working toe-to-toe with men, and sometimes even outperform their male counterparts. For example, chancellor of Germany, Angela Merkel, who has done remarkable job at handling many sketchy situations at national and international level. Many more examples like this can be given. Therefore, it is quite right to imply that women can do any job they want, should they choose to do it.
However, we must accept the scientific fact that biologically men and women are different. Implication of this is that jobs where brute force or strength is more important are not well suited for women. For instance, working on an offshore oilrig. In this case, workers not only have to live far away on site in the ocean, but also possess certain physical fitness and strength to perform various tasks.
In my opinion, when it comes to general population, both genders are equal intellectually and physically. There are many fitness regimes, which negate the biological differences in the gender. However, at the advanced level such as elite athletes, no matter how much you train, biological differences can be very clearly seen. At this level, women will lack behind their male counterpart.
Finally, the issue whether men and women are equal is complex. Experts are debating over this for long time. Should the women choose to work in any field they want? The answer is resounding yes. If they have all required skillset, then there should not be any discrimination based on gender.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00578034682 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59683005714 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560693641618 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9631028172 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7272727273 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86363636364 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.477680759452 0.244688304435 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135012314485 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123528071388 0.0667982634062 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25909045843 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128201622806 0.056905535591 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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