Some people argue that government should stop supporting the professional sporting events and cultural program and instead support schools from where students can take up sports and arts. What your opinion.
It is commonly argued by many that government should stop promoting the professional sporting and cultural programs and support schools instead. In my opinion, this is a nice suggestion and In this essay, I will provide supportive statements that make my opinion strong.
First of all, Education institutions have large number of students in contrast to specific sporting or cultural event centers. If government support schools then more number of children could benefit out of it.
Also sometimes due to financial crisis or personal issues students could not join sports clubs or cultural programs explicitly. However, every student irrespective of gender, economic background, goes to school for education. Therefore, this trend would benefit underprivileged students and give them opportunity to enroll in extra-curricular activities and improve their skills.
Moreover, if government support schools for such cultural activities and sport programs this will definitely raise job-opportunities for trainers, coaches in schools. People love to work for government organisations as compared to private activity centers. This will further mitigate the unemployment issue.
In conclusion, It is really appreciable that government provide support for these adventurous activities. However, it will be more fruitful, if government promote schools for such activities as every school going child could enjoy it and it will offer job opportunities also.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, really, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all, in contrast to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91509433962 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15868724168 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622641509434 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6084246327 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316636963618 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122170169611 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120364578546 0.0667982634062 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184297942851 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0903932735125 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.76 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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