The general welfare of a nation's people is a better indication of that nation's greatness than are the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists.
A nation's true prosperity lies in overall development of its citizen rather then accomplishments of some affluent people or potent rulers of the nation.
The nation's progress lies in the hand of its denizens. If people are bereaved of their fundamental rights thus hampering their welfare, a nation with however rich and prodigious achievers will founder into starvation, revolts against the government forced to cede to other developed nation. The history is inundated with such cases. For example the Roman empire enriched with great rulers, artist but failed to bring prosperity among its people ultimately resulting into end of their empire.
A nation can true progress only by ensuring equality among its people. laws must be enforced for educational, social and economical stability of its citizens, lacking of such laws have egregious ramifications patent in history. For example india, a nation of multicultural people still impotent to achieve equality among people - some industrialist like Mukesh Ambani are richest in the world while many people are unable to get bread for daily consumptions thus making india a still developing country despite of many Indian artists and scientists being eminent throughout the world.
However a nation's focus should only be general welfare of people but also appropriate budget to other important fields that will ultimately benefit to citizens. The government must provide resources like laboratories and research centers to scientists where they can continuously contribute in nation's progress. For example invasion of unprecedented virus into nation causing rapid infections to citizens. Without medical researches and resources provided to scientist nation would be unable to vanquish the virus thus no matter how well developed people are nation would suffer.
In conclusion the nation must ensure appropriate considerations to both general welfare of its inhabitants along with encouraging its resources like artists and scientists in their achievements for human prosperity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...erall development of its citizen rather then accomplishments of some affluent people...
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Line 5, column 72, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Laws
... by ensuring equality among its people. laws must be enforced for educational, socia...
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Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...be enforced for educational, social and economical stability of its citizens, lacking of s...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... being eminent throughout the world. However a nations focus should only be general ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, then, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 306.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67647058824 5.05705443957 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9044052073 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575163398693 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.8891417586 60.3974514979 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.615384615 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 5.21951772744 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281400466912 0.243740707755 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110671585585 0.0831039109588 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556441796007 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175569797847 0.150359130593 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243607074194 0.0667264976115 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 14.1392134831 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 48.8420337079 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 12.1639044944 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.38706741573 119% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.