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Advertising is increasingly entering more
and more personal areas of our lives.
While public schools may benefit from
additional revenue from advertising, there
are negative implications that should be
taken into consideration. This essay will
discuss the advantages and
disadvantages of advertising in schools
and explain why it should not be used as
a way to generate more revenue.
There are various reasons why public
schools might use advertising to generate
more revenues. For example, a school
might be poor and advertising might be
the only option to make additional
revenue. Many schools in poor areas do
in fact use advertising to bolster their
budgets. While advertising might be an
easy option for schools to make money,
they may want to consider other options.
There are various reasons why public
schools should not use advertising to
make more money. Academic integrity
may be compromised by advertising in the
school and as a result children may be
exploited. It is well known that companies
often target children in advertising
campaigns that may not be ethical. The
effect that advertising might have on
children at schools may have negative
consequences.
This essay discussed the reasons why
schools may or may not use advertising to
increase revenues. In my opinion, schools
should refrain from advertising because
academic integrity should be more
important than making additional money.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-06-14 | neethujithin | 11 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 19, column 10, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... advertising to bolster their budgets. While advertising might be an easy option ...
^^^^^
Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Easy
...dgets. While advertising might be an easy option for schools to make money, they...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, so, well, while, for example, in fact, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 6.10837438424 311% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 223.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68609865471 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92285192982 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 139.433497537 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47533632287 0.580463131201 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 375.3 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.8354814828 50.4703680194 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.5384615385 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1538461538 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 36.0 4.12807881773 872% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.014528867006 0.242375264174 6% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00755528631897 0.0925447433944 8% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0121759223544 0.071462118173 17% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00461682421712 0.151781067708 3% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0138736973447 0.0609392437508 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 11.5310837438 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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