It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job, is not a good choice. Do you agree or disagree.
Surely there has been no time in the history where the lives of people changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on a typical day reveals that getting married in early age has been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. In this essay I will discuss some of the advantages and disadvantages in my further crumb of writing .
At the outset, numerous factors are associated to this phenomenon. The most prominent is that, it make a person emotionally and mentally strong. What is more, it make a person economically weak, so he can face problems to arrange funds for higher studies
Nevertheless, there are few disadvantages also. The first and formats, is family responsibility as married couple should have to spend too much time with life partner, unfortunately, they find it hard for them to spend quality time with each due to extra work or burden of studies.
To sum up, i firmly believe, undoubtedly, there are some benefits of this for a person. However, there are ample of demerits of this trend which are unavoidable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 1207.87684729 73% => OK
No of words: 178.0 242.827586207 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95505617978 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.92707691288 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96056707378 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679775280899 0.580463131201 117% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 379.143842365 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4155186258 50.4703680194 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0427869590757 0.242375264174 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0146191568302 0.0925447433944 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344709233498 0.071462118173 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0217912450882 0.151781067708 14% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273538862569 0.0609392437508 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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