You are visiting a town where you once worked. Write to a friend you worked with you there. Include the following in your letter:
– Tell him/her about your life now
– Give him/her the details of your visit
– Arrange how you can meet.
Dear Jenny,
Hope this letter will find you in pink of your health and high spirits. You will be happy to know that, next week I am coming to Brampton for a business trip. I want to meet you this time so please arrange your time accordingly.
Now, I am working with Sun Solutions as a Project Manager. My company is very good and giving good benefits to me. I am happily married and having two children. My parents got retired from the job and they are staying with me now.
As per my plans, I will reach Brampton on Thursday 12th May by flight no AC235.
I have a meeting with clients on Thursday evening. On Friday I am having some appointments and trainings sessions which are scheduled throughout the entire day.
But I will be free on Saturday for you and on Sunday I have a flight back to London. We can meet on lunch or diner, in 'Happy Moments Restaurant' on Saturday, when you are comfortable. Please note my new phone number 7346982 and feel free to give me a call if any changes in your plans.
Pay my regards to your parents and love to children. Eagerly waiting to meet you.
Your faithfully,
James.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 51, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: On
...eeting with clients on Thursday evening.On Friday I am having some appointments an...
^^
Line 8, column 134, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
... trainings sessions which are scheduled through out the entire day. But I will be free on ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 14, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... meet you. Your faithfully, James.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44230769231 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39621866809 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634615384615 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3065868757 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.6 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8666666667 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.93333333333 4.34317383033 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268089329228 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935907937942 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728611942125 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123034378029 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0991930980284 0.0580467560999 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.88 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.63 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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