Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be a good members of society.others,however,believe that school is the place to learn this.
Some people think that Parents should teach children how to be a good members of a society.others however,believe that school is the place to learn this.In my opinion both parents and teachers play an important role for making the children character.
Firstly,parents play important role in their children life.They give first guideline to their children.Home is the first school for children where the children start learning.children always note down the activities which are happen in their home.Parents are the role model for their children.It is the duty of the parents to teach their children about their culture by telling the different stories related to their culture.The environment at home should be peace and quiet so children growing in a good environment.
secondly,school is our second home.In school children meet different types of children.They learn different things from different people.In school children learn about different culture,religion and other activities.School is the best place for learning values and good manners.In school they learn how to work together as a team member.It is mandatory that the environment of school should be good.If the environment is good children will be polite and good to others.
From above,it conclude that both parents and school have equal role to make child a good members of society.Both are a part of same coin.It is very difficult to choose one particular person because both teach the children in their own way.children learn different things from their parents and teachers.Both are necessary to make a children to be a good citizen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38095238095 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20333230691 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488095238095 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 63.0 20.2975951904 310% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.402127638 49.4020404114 209% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 339.0 106.682146367 318% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 63.0 20.7667163134 303% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.0 7.06120827912 227% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.527189214103 0.244688304435 215% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.353190671388 0.084324248473 419% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148644531605 0.0667982634062 223% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.353190671388 0.151304729494 233% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148644531605 0.056905535591 261% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.4 13.0946893788 270% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 7.53 50.2224549098 15% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.9 11.3001002004 247% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.81 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.2 10.1190380762 269% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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