Nowadays, more and more people are spending less time at home.
Why do you think it happens? What effect does this have on individuals and society?
Times are changing and so do the lifestyle of people. Earlier were the days people spend more time being at home, but today, this trend is on decline. This essay discusses its reasons and probable effects on the individuals as well as on the community.
To embark with, Globalization and Urbanization have changed the dynamics of the society and there are boundless reasons people remain for less time at home. Firstly, in this extremely competitive world, people are running behind materialistic gains which eventually force them for long working schedule, sometimes more than 12 hours. Secondly, due to influx of people, boundaries of cities are transcending their previous borders; and corporations are setting up their business in the outskirts of the city resulting in long commuting hours. Furthermore, during weekends people go for leisure activities outside their house. Augmenting number of club memberships, profuse increase in sales of theatre tickets and selling of merchandises in shopping complexes, reflects the fact more precisely.
As every coin has two sides, there are few positives as well as negatives of this phenomenon. To begin with the positives, people spend more on their past time. Money changes its hand and economy flourishes due to use of facilities from hospitality industry, entertainment industry and many more; employment increases. On the other side, long working hours because of insurmountable pressure to achieve targets leads to unhealthy lifestyle, for instance, stress, anxiety from less sleep and to name a few. Additionally, children grow up with lack of parenthood. These days, both parents are employed in majority of cases. Ergo, child learns to be less social and interactive with each others. This is really worrisome.
To conclude, I pen down by saying that demerits outweigh the merits and hence, people should have appropriate conscience about their ways of living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...e positives, people spend more on their past time. Money changes its hand and economy flo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40863787375 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88052703696 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667774086379 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.0228069228 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7647058824 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7058823529 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05882352941 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284579990613 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815883995846 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824817374488 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167275676974 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0953282361709 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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