TPO-27 - Integrated Writing Task The little ice age was a period of unusually cold temperature in many parts of the world that lasted from about the year 1350 until 1900CE. There were unusually harsh winters, and glaciers grew larger in many areas. Scient
The passage discusses that the little ice age was a period of cold temperature and provides three reasons about its cause. However, the professor refutes all these three reasons by stating that these ideas are out of date.
First, the passage claims that there is a possibility that distruption of ocean currents was the cause of the little ice age. The passage rejects this idea and explains that these disruptions only caused to decrease in the temperature of some parts of the world such as Europe. so, this reason is not acceptable.
Second, the text argues that volcanic eruptions created the ice age. IN contrast, the lecture rejects this concept by describing that only a large omunt of dusts could block the sun, but there are no reports of these amount of dust. As you can see, the mentioned reason in the article is unconvincing.
Third, the passage asserts that substantial decrease in human population is one reason that contributes to the cooling of the climate. while the professor explains that decrease in the uman population ws just temporary and after a while the population was increased. so, by increasing their population they started to clear the forest to cultivate different plants. As a result, the amount of greenhouse gas increased, again. Finally, we can say that the mentiones reason in the article is not true, and it is just nonsense.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 279, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...some parts of the world such as Europe. so, this reason is not acceptable. Second...
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Line 4, column 135, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...tributes to the cooling of the climate. while the professor explains that decrease in...
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Line 4, column 267, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...r a while the population was increased. so, by increasing their population they st...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, third, while, in contrast, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 1373.03311258 83% => OK
No of words: 231.0 270.72406181 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92640692641 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63896047085 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 145.348785872 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541125541126 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 419.366225166 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8966251403 49.2860985944 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5384615385 110.228320801 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 21.698381199 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06452816374 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323679005243 0.272083759551 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105047347073 0.0996497079465 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852871367823 0.0662205650399 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189144585032 0.162205337803 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615822473401 0.0443174109184 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.3589403974 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.2367328918 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 63.6247240618 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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