You have heard about plans to build new apartments in a public park near your home. You want to give your opinion about this.
Write a letter to the editor of your local newspaper. In your letter
1- Explain how you learnt about these plans
2- Say what you think of the park
3- Give our opinion on the plans
Dear Sir or Madam,
I had read in our community magazine, which published last week on 24 June that the local authority is planning to build new flats and condominiums in a public park next to my home and as I one of the local resident of this neighborhood and I have some thoughts that I want to explain.
Firstly, I believe that building in this exact location may lead to catastrophic disaster. To illustrate, our local park built in 1920, and has various types of ancient trees and plants that is why it decided to be national treasure. Moreover, children and elderly goes every day to this park to play, breathe fresh air and doing sunbathing. As a result, I tend to think that this plan need some modification.
However, I understand needs to construct new apartments to absorb highly demand for new houses, but this can be reached by reconstruction outskirts areas around cities. On top of that, I believe our park needs to develop, and implants more palm trees.
I hope your newspaper explain our concern and solutions, so we looking forward to read your upcoming article about this topic.
Yours Faithfully,
Mohamed
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 80, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to reading'.
Suggestion: to reading
...rn and solutions, so we looking forward to read your upcoming article about this topic....
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Line 13, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s topic. Yours Faithfully, Mohamed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, as a result, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 950.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84693877551 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73861278753 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673469387755 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.5916580413 44.8134815571 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.555555556 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.55555555556 4.34317383033 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221822864522 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826730003833 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066948621611 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121604750839 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644399531641 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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