More and more parents are allowing their children to play on computers and tablets as they think that children should learn technology skills.
Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
It has been observed that many parents are encouraging their minors to operate different technological devices such as computers and tablets because, according to them, it is crucial for children to learn technical abilities. In this essay, I will delve deeper into this topic by discussing both the advantages and the disadvantages of the aforementioned viewpoint, while advocating for the former.
Despite the drawbacks, some of the benefits for using advanced gadgets include applying technology in schoolwork and connecting globally via the internet. In terms of the applications in academics, the pupils are likely to use computers to create animation contents using applications like Adobe Flash or Microsoft Power Point whereby they could present the complex concepts of science subjects via visual aid ; as a result, the class would be able enjoy and understand the presentation. Consequently, the adolescent will gain confidence, and hence, they perform well academically with the help of technology.
Admittedly, exposure to adult content and overusing the devices are some of the drawbacks of allowing youngsters to play with cutting edge inventions. In regard to having the intense usage, the children might operate the devices for hours due to which they could procrastinate to complete other important tasks such as homework; therefore, the juveniles would under perform in school. Nevertheless, the caregivers must ensure the limited and appropriate usage of the technological gears by their children.
In conclusion, although people may favor the disadvantages for allowing children to play computers or tablets, I personally believe that its benefits outweigh drawbacks. This is because it can enable children to apply technical skills in academics so that they can achieve outstanding grades in their courses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63537906137 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0794833564 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631768953069 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.7980582219 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.1 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267453969684 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961968205625 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635432468285 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159683895891 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075713945077 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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