The role of prisons should be to punish criminals who have committed serious crimes. Training courses and education offered to prisoners are a waste of taxpayer’s money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It would be argued by some that the function of jails should be to impose a penalty for the serious criminals and education for them is not necessary but also waste of government's budget. In my opinion, however, I believe that punishment and education in prisons are both necessary for the people stayed there.
On the one hand, the primary reason why some people think that the criminals should be punished. this helps to isolate them from society, variety of punishments or forced labours with strict supervision to let them know consequences of their illegal action, reducing their criminal intentions after release. beside that education and career training, I thinks, the government should apply to prisoners, these assist the prisoners learn more skills, which may missed during their live in the outside world. In addition, to attend full all classes and job training program are also a kind of discipline, which forced them have to obey something, this will make the criminal would hesitate to commit threats to society. For example, The scientists has proved that the criminal ratio would be sharply decrease in high education people level.
On the other hand, I would argued that the roles of prisons should be combined both methods education and punishment for the prisoners, Because corporal punishment helps them realize that their sins deserve to be treated like that. education helps them improve their vision and understanding which is the main reason for them to know what is right and what is wrong. career helps them to be able to find a suitable job to avoid too much free time which can cause negative effects.
In conclusion, although some people say that there will be waste of time and money of state for serious criminals who has jailed about education and training courses, I personally believe that combine the both methods in education and vocational guidance will be the best way.
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...cational guidance will be the best way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, may, so, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04088050314 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50345475466 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534591194969 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.5456777261 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.727272727 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9090909091 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9090909091 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252448238133 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10127776335 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519597068738 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168146929987 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183281662774 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.