many people believe that the main aim of university education is to help graduates find better jobs, while some people believe that a university education has wider benefits for individuals and society as a whole.Discuss both of views and give your opinio

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...ut the main aim of university education.In fact, there are some who hold firmly to...
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...ing graduates an edge in the job market.However, others argue that it plays a wider rol...
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...society as a whole.As far as I concerned ,I wholehearted agree with latter argumen...
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...ents to find suitable job in the future.First of all, it is a well-known fact that th...
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...ass the university entrance examination.Moreover, there is no denying that with both the...
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...cademic education and the uncertainty of a competitive job market, paying more at...
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...ent issue of graduates can be justified.However, this is does not mean the real purpose...
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...pose of higher education is or should be , career oriented Despite of this fac...
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...tion is or should be , career oriented Despite of this fact that the practical ...
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...r people to support the latter argument.First and foremost , it is commonly accepted ...
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...t the latter argument.First and foremost , it is commonly accepted that university...
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...tand themselves and their society better,also focusing on the development of students...
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...nt of students personality and morality.An evidence being found to prove is that p...
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...eloping people to live in the right way.Furthermore, there is no denying that Students wou...
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...derstand what is important in their life , not in term of gaining a bachelor degre...
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...edge to develop and support the society.For example, obviously that more and more v...
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...port providing by economical researchers , most of the countries which have energy...
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...f the countries which have energy people , develop the economic faster than others...
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...e than getting trained for a decent job.Accordingly , I highly recommended that the governm...
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...on.If this recommendation is carried out , the comprehensive development of our so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, another thing, for example, in fact, first of all, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 13.1623246493 228% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2496.0 1615.20841683 155% => OK
No of words: 476.0 315.596192385 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24369747899 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15682892409 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 801.0 506.74238477 158% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 238.0 20.2975951904 1173% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 1121.5 49.4020404114 2270% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 1248.0 106.682146367 1170% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 238.0 20.7667163134 1146% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 70.5 7.06120827912 998% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 37.0 5.01903807615 737% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294171632621 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189558296049 0.084324248473 225% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0975338615393 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183458212681 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678555563264 0.056905535591 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 122.3 13.0946893788 934% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -178.55 50.2224549098 -356% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 97.3 11.3001002004 861% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.59 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 19.32 8.58950901804 225% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 9.78957915832 592% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 97.2 10.1190380762 961% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 58.0 10.7795591182 538% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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