Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?
We are living in a world where technology is globalized, and knowledge is accessible everywhere. This situation has led to the design and development of several products that are minimizing human efforts. Every day new products are being launched in the market; some may be useful, some may not. The reachability of these products solely rests on the efficiency of advertisement. Sometimes advertisements are misleading people to purchase products which are not useful. But an advertisement is often helpful to know about new products available in the market.
Active research is going on in the field of medicine and healthcare. Suppose that a group of researchers has produced a new tablet. There is no use of the tablet unless it gets the needed attention and publicity. Here advertisement is the critical factor. The doctoral community and the common people get to know about the tablet, and they start using it with the help of advertisements. Products to check blood pressure, heartbeat, weight, blood sugar, etc. are also crucial in our life. Such types of equipment must be made available to the common people through the use of advertisement; why one should consult a doctor every time to check blood pressure when they can do it by themselves.
Kitchen utilities are the class the products which offer maximum efficiency with minimum effort. Nowadays we have machines for cutting vegetable or grinding them. These will help us to save time and effort. Proper advertisements are needed for the promotion of such utilities.
Another advantage of advertisement is in the field of education. New institutions are being established, new online platforms are providing study material, and the only way to know about these initiatives is through advertisement. Learning new things has become easier with new marketing strategies.
To conclude, advertising has its advantages when used in the right way. It will help to improve our lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...way. It will help to improve our lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24600638978 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02908087909 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571884984026 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0951531765 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3913043478 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6086956522 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.95652173913 7.06120827912 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28060803066 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706188492669 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453815020765 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142456502263 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321697773376 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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