There is only one definition of success-to be able to spend your life in your own way.
In Humankind evolution, if a person choose to live in 2 ways then we have two kind of results: one that is spoiled that does not work and is bad for society and another that choose to spend their life to follow their passion and leads to revolve society. So, we can not agree with author's success definition because a person can lead his lif but he has to follow some convention.
If a person thinks that if he will be able to spend his life in own way that makes him successful then he is thinking wrong. Sometimes, leading your life in own way make you eccentric and make you peculiar. Keeping societical rules make you enjouy your life in systematic way and help you to lead your life in systematic way. If we think about a person who is highly intelligent but kind of peculiar and care free attitude then sometimes he make a choice that leads him to some trouble that hurts his reputation and make feel like lose. If a person break a traffic signal and describe it as his own way to not believe in traffic rules then that leads towards accident. If a person does not believe in monetory and taxes rules that leads to leagal action by government. Yes, you can lead your life in your own way if that makes you happy but there is one boundry and you can't define whole success parameter by choosing own way of spening life.
If we think that person who spends his own life by own thoughts and told himself successful then what about other great scientis, social servicing person and other persons who help to society to revolve. You have some responsibility towards society. Which you can fulfill under your own belief by pursuing something that help humankind. If we take example of newton - he has own belief and want to spend his life in own way. However he did choose science and give great formula that led many scientific revolutionary device. Steve jobs and Bill gates are also example of choosing a career that makes them successful by spending life their own way but they did not forget about helping humankind. If a person has whole community thoughts in his own way then we can describe himself as successful. However, if a person doesn't have ability to fulfill his own life then how can we descibe him as successful person.
There is a concept about happiness. If you follow your hobby then there is a more chance of getting successful inside that field because of you like what you are doing. If a person is doing great work, earning money, respect and follow his passion then we can say he is successful and leading his life in own way. But there is some rules that he has to do work and get out of his comfort zone to do some great work. However, if a person spends his own life in own way then that may be create chaotic situation in that person's life as he doesn't know about future and that becomes threat for his family and for person himself. So, if a person wants to describe himself as a successful then he has to do something great for community or for at least for himself. If a wright brothers does not belive his own thoughts and spend life for achieving that then we never have a plane to ride. If a writer does not believe in his own creativity then we does not have so much good literature. If a fashion designer does not love what he does and does not trust his instincts then that does not make him successful. However a person has to choose a profession and work for that because spoiling it calling it own way does not make you successful.
If a person wants to get recognition as successful then by spending his own life in own way is not a perfect definition because success has also parameters like how much he influenced the society and also money. So, without spoiling life and giving name as own way if a person wants to be successful then he has to choose own way that helps him to make better person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'kind' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'kinds'.
Suggestion: kinds
...oose to live in 2 ways then we have two kind of results: one that is spoiled that do...
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Line 3, column 442, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
...nd care free attitude then sometimes he make a choice that leads him to some trouble...
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Line 3, column 670, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rules then that leads towards accident. If a person does not believe in monetory a...
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Line 3, column 871, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... happy but there is one boundry and you cant define whole success parameter by choos...
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Line 3, column 919, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to own'
Suggestion: to own
...ine whole success parameter by choosing own way of spening life. If we think t...
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Line 6, column 251, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ve some responsibility towards society. Which you can fulfill under your own belief b...
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Line 6, column 426, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... and want to spend his life in own way. However he did choose science and give great fo...
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Line 6, column 818, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...elf as successful. However, if a person doesnt have ability to fulfill his own life t...
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Line 6, column 861, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...snt have ability to fulfill his own life then how can we descibe him as successfu...
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Line 9, column 319, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are some rules'?
Suggestion: there are some rules
...ul and leading his life in own way. But there is some rules that he has to do work and get out of h...
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Line 9, column 519, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...may be create chaotic situation in that persons life as he doesnt know about future and...
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Line 9, column 538, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ic situation in that persons life as he doesnt know about future and that becomes thre...
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Line 9, column 885, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hat then we never have a plane to ride. If a writer does not believe in his own cr...
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Line 9, column 944, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'do'
Suggestion: do
...t believe in his own creativity then we does not have so much good literature. If a ...
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Line 9, column 983, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... does not have so much good literature. If a fashion designer does not love what h...
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Line 9, column 1105, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...then that does not make him successful. However a person has to choose a profession and...
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Line 12, column 52, Rule ID: AS_ADJ_AS[1]
Message: Comparison is written "as successful 'as'".
Suggestion: as
... wants to get recognition as successful then by spending his own life in own way is ...
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Line 12, column 323, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to own'
Suggestion: to own
... to be successful then he has to choose own way that helps him to make better perso...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, as to, at least, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 14.8657303371 209% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 27.0 11.3162921348 239% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 101.0 33.0505617978 306% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3147.0 2235.4752809 141% => OK
No of words: 713.0 442.535393258 161% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41374474053 5.05705443957 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.16740358842 4.55969084622 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34644837468 2.79657885939 84% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.34221598878 0.4932671777 69% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 984.6 704.065955056 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 17.0 3.10617977528 547% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7609983421 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.517241379 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5862068966 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1724137931 5.21951772744 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320245723729 0.243740707755 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11182904927 0.0831039109588 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0959141832979 0.0758088955206 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225213707256 0.150359130593 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782979187202 0.0667264976115 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 48.8420337079 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 12.1639044944 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.38706741573 83% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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