Design of the building will have a positive or negative impact on people’s
life and work. Agree or disagree?
The impact of buildings design on peoples life and work was always a debatable topic. Many
people believe that design of buildings will contribute on person development both in personal
life and professional field. In my opinion, I completely agree with the statement that in the
modern world infrastructure plays an key role in every individual life. This essay would further
elaborate the reasons why design of buildings will have huge influence on people with real time
examples and thus lead to a plausible conclusion. Firstly, innovative designs motivates the people to work in organization environment and
enhance creating thinking as they feel working in better infrastructure facility. In present world,
people are more attracted to engage with companies which has proper infrastructure and design.
For example, innovative designs and buildings encourage employees to work more better and at
the same time it will also increase the productivity of workers which in turn yields good profits
and reputation to the organization. This example clearly exemplifies us that there is a correlation
between building designs and employee productivity.
Secondly, infrastructure plays an vital role in one's life and health. Modern buildings with good
ventilation facilities and good space attributes to the health of people. Few designs have a
scientific impact on people health. For example, buildings with innovative designs and good
privacy space will have less chance of obtaining diseases such as Allergy, dust disease and many
more. Modern buildings provide enough space for one's privacy. From the above analysis, it is clear that health of people will totally depend upon the construction and design of new buildings. According to the arguments aforementioned, one can reach out to conclusion that design of
buildings will have positive impact on people's life and work and further the organizations and builders need to take initiative to build buildings with proper infrastructure by keeping people health in mind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 31.9359605911 147% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1207.87684729 144% => OK
No of words: 313.0 242.827586207 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55910543131 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98531144688 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 139.433497537 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543130990415 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 534.6 379.143842365 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3653953932 50.4703680194 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.12807881773 436% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372966628155 0.242375264174 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138343073661 0.0925447433944 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935574889653 0.071462118173 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125358102787 0.151781067708 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931922315483 0.0609392437508 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 11.5310837438 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.