There are many types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important and should it be preserved or is international music that is heard everywhere nowadays more useful to a society?
People in the world nowadays are connected together thanks to the vital role of music as a marked milestone. Based on the diversity of many type of music such as traditional music or international songs so people have many choices to listen to everyday, I strongly believe that any of them have their own outlook and the following essay take a look at both side of the argument.
As we can see, music has appeared since the dawn of man and people cannot deny that it brings a huge profits to the globe. First of all, it goes without saying that music makes an outstanding contribution to communicate people closer. As a result, regardless of skin colors, nationalities or ages, they just need to be passionate about music. Secondly, although it take a lot of time to learn how to play musical instruments, people will gain many benefits from it. For example, people are facing many pressure in their routine life and they may feel frustrated. Therefore, playing violin, guitar and so on can help them reduce stress and maintain health.
There is nothing to compare with traditional music because it not only suitable for many generations but it also contain cultural identity of the nation. A good example is that when foreign travelers go to a country, they would like to listen the variety of songs in order to discover cultural uniqueness in this country. However, exploring music culture in the world is also essential due to the globalization. For instance, indigenous residents can absorb each other’s culture through music or musical instruments.
In conclusion, music is an essential tool which inspires people to connect to each other and overcome problems in their life. In addition, any type of them such as traditional music or international music have their own noticeable points so it should be preserved for the next generations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 136, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun type seems to be countable; consider using: 'many types'.
Suggestion: many types
...ed milestone. Based on the diversity of many type of music such as traditional music or i...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...o people have many choices to listen to everyday, I strongly believe that any of them ha...
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Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'profit'?
Suggestion: profit
...eople cannot deny that it brings a huge profits to the globe. First of all, it goes wit...
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Message: Did you mean 'takes'?
Suggestion: takes
...nate about music. Secondly, although it take a lot of time to learn how to play musi...
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Line 3, column 498, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun pressure seems to be countable; consider using: 'many pressures'.
Suggestion: many pressures
...from it. For example, people are facing many pressure in their routine life and they may feel...
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Message: Did you mean 'contains'?
Suggestion: contains
...itable for many generations but it also contain cultural identity of the nation. A good...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96474358974 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80166891361 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586538461538 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1544401957 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.642857143 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7142857143 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353844785311 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128298181297 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817443005389 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231244705777 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387622986099 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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