Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is considered by some that increase in fuel prices will be the most effective way to reduce environmental problems. In my opinion, although this approach will increase travelling cost, it is necessary to implement so that more pressing issue of global warming can be minimized.
Opponents of this approach argue that rise in fuel prices will result in problem for poor people. According to them, this action will increase travelling cost which will have a little effect on rich people, but this will make travelling difficult for poor. For example, in Gujranwala, 60 per cent of citizens cannot afford their own cars and travel using local transport due to its affordability. However, higher cost of travel due to the high oil prices will strip them from the only luxury they have.
On the other hand, this is necessary to overcome more serious issue of global warming. Carbon dioxide emission is mainly responsible for this effect and the biggest source of it is the combustion of fossil fuels in the industries and vehicles. For instance, intergovernmental panel on climate change has reported that 2 degrees rise in temperature has been recorded as a result of last year’s Carbon dioxide accumulation. Therefore, increase in fuel cost will reduce its usage, as a result this will minimize carbon emission which is necessary to avoid adverse climate changes.
In conclusion, although rise in fuel prices will cause travelling problem for poor, it is completely justified by taking in consideration its positive effects on environment. To protect our coming generations from serious environmental issues, these strict steps are necessary to take.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22097378277 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87912441627 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565543071161 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8413277924 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.166666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158199337785 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677708385298 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412682001734 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105506541033 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169220637659 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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