The bar chart below gives information about the number of students studying Computer Science at a UK between 2010 and 2012.
The given bar chart illustrates the number of students who studying about computer science in british between year 2010 and 2012.It clearly seen that highest count of learner in the year of 2010.
In 2011 the students topped almost 12000. Apart from this the in 2011 the amount of student leassr.It means the interest in computer science become low on every year.
In summary, The english people more interested in 2011 for the computer science but after 2011 the count went gradually lower.
In summary, The english people more interested in 2011 for the computer science but after 2011 the count went gradually lower.
In summary, The english people more interested in 2011 for the computer science but after 2011 the count went gradually lower.
In summary, The english people more interested in 2011 for the computer science but after 2011 the count went gradually lower.
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, apart from, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 747.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 146.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11643835616 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24345130266 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 55.0 106.607317073 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.376712328767 0.547539520022 69% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 202.5 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3067173467 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.714285714 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193362421109 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119044109545 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118357158619 0.0843802449381 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130224880095 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124976175901 0.0819641961636 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.47 8.06136585366 80% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 40.7170731707 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.