Some people think the government funding should not be used for supporting art and culture, others think supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for the population and the culture. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is belived that art and cultural activities are a quite significant for society, because they are beneficial for multi-cultural communities and they can support the multi-directional consideration. In exact point, the affair appear that government should allocate fund and help to art and cultural activities or should not and some associations and organizations are set up for it.
In one hand, governments should work for people who are consist of different cultural based in society about their happiness and people want artistic organization and show their cultural activities. Because of this, government should support to organizations, events and festivals about culture and art by giving money from state treasury. For example, government can give payment to artists for their opening exhibition in the certain periods of the year. Thus, civil benefit from this artistic activities.
On the other hand, people can establish non-profit association for funding to art and cultural activities. And also, kind of associations can prepare report about activities and declare demands civil’s requests about this to municipalities or authorizes. However, we should known that even though these associations keep stand with charity, they need funds from states.
What has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that, art and culture, which is lifeblood and require for employment and bright futures in modern and global world for states, are promoted by both government and association, but governments definitely should always be stand back at cultural and artistic organization with their funds.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 49, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...and, governments should work for people who are consist of different cultural based in ...
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Line 2, column 57, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'consisted'.
Suggestion: consisted
...ernments should work for people who are consist of different cultural based in society ...
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Line 3, column 279, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[2]
Message: Did you mean 'have known' or 'know'?
Suggestion: have known; know
...ities or authorizes. However, we should known that even though these associations kee...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, may, so, thus, for example, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62195121951 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07727873154 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593495934959 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.4318409958 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.3 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349001228639 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13329900199 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803945192167 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208264491923 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589457797624 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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