After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by another person. Write a special letter to express your thanks.
You should write at least 150 words.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Dear John,
I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude. I am referring to that unfortunate accident the other day, when I was knocked off my bike by a taxi. If it had not been for your timely assistance in giving me first aid and taking me to a nearby hospital, I fear that the consequences might have been much more serious.
The doctor says that my broken leg is healing well, and the bruises and cuts I suffered will soon be completely better. In addition, the taxi company has agreed to pay my hospital bills. Everyone agrees that it was your quick-witted response in that emergency tha...
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Avg. Sentence Length: 14 21.0
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 10
No. of Words: 168 200
No. of Characters: 749 1000
No. of Different Words: 118 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.6 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.458 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.461 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 48 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 32 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 24 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 14 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.318 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.417 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.296 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.703 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.107 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 4