about myself

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about myself

First of all, I'm gonna introduce about myself. My name is Hien, I am 19 years old and I am a second-years student of the Thuong Mai university, my major is marketing. I'm keen on studying English, reading and watching topics about science and finance. so, next year, I will take an examination which testing my English skills, called ''IELTS". The IELTS exam concludes 4 skills: listening, reading, writing and speaking. My writing is terrible and I've just found this website and I really hope it will improve my writing.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
First of all, Im gonna introduce about myself. My name i...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... Mai university, my major is marketing. Im keen on studying English, reading and w...
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Line 1, column 252, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ching topics about science and finance. so, next year, I will take an examination ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...nd speaking. My writing is terrible and Ive just found this website and I really ho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, really, second, so, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 41.998997996 12% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 434.0 1615.20841683 27% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 90.0 315.596192385 29% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82222222222 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.08007028824 4.20363070211 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78319471822 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 69.0 176.041082164 39% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.766666666667 0.561755894193 136% => OK
syllable_count: 128.7 506.74238477 25% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.5733372711 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.3333333333 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143563390707 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906912896497 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151077513966 0.0667982634062 226% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143563390707 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 78.4519038076 29% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.33 Out of 6
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