2.Increase in information in media, the role of a library to updating textbooks is obsolete, agree or disagree?
Many people believe that the library will be replaced due to advanced technology. My opinion is digital books will gradually taking replace printed books
One on hand, libraries play a role to provide information for others, however, it is gradually been replacing by online resources. Since the invention of the internet, people are able to access information more easily. TED talks and youtube can be as an example, people can learn science, photograph, technology through the internet whereas they type in keywords on the search engine, and they will get related information directly. Online media provides various information and knowledge for people to learn without time and space limitations.
On the other hand, the reason that libraries are obsolete due to the limited book amount, location, and time. Due to the size of a library is restricted, it has a limit amount of books so it can serve everyone who is interested in the same book while online resources do not have this problem. Besides, digital information also provides an efficient approach to humans. For instance, both researchers and students are benefited from online resources for their researches which allows them to complete their studies in a short time compared that of libraries can do.
In conclusion, online media gradually take replace libraries is inevitable due to its various information from different platforms and non-limited resources, no restriction of time nor location.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'take'
Suggestion: take
...opinion is digital books will gradually taking replace printed books One on hand, l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, so, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35344827586 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82847967381 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603448275862 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2034131767 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.2 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.25397266985 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139928955199 0.242375264174 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061557929312 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283114650001 0.071462118173 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.087068740753 0.151781067708 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392677097267 0.0609392437508 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 12.6369458128 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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