Nowadays sending children to boarding school (either in other countries or in their own countries)is becoming popular. Why is it? Is it a positive development?
It is quite irrefutable; the dynamics of education system have been changed rampantly over the years. While, there could be numerous reasons behind it such as hectic schedule of progenitors and even local disturbances, in my opinion, this growing trend leaves a positive impact in an individual life owing to enriching overall growth.
To initiate, it has been seen that there are enormous reasons behind this actions. Firstly, busy lifestyle of parents, in the fast moving world everybody is running a rat race after money, success, and desires etcetera. For an illustration, nowadays generally both the parents are working leaving the child behind at home alone and consequently the child is unaware of love, kindness and adore. The prominent teachings of childhood lag behind and that is why children are sent to boarding school where they can learn all the good and bad of the societies and make themselves prepare to compete the cruel world. Secondly, the working hours, parents generally have working hours which hinders the social life of the family. Consequently, parents are bound to take such actions.
Furthermore, the domestic violence is one of the factors which are increasing gradually over the years and henceforth parents want their children away from such environment. What is more, the quality of education boarding schools in native country and in the abroad as well renders outstanding education which is why parents send their children to such schools in order to fetch the best education.
Moving further, sending children to boarding has a positive impact in their life such as an individual understands responsibility of his/her own towards himself/herself and towards society. Secondly, management, this utmost skill in terms of money, time etcetera for instance an individual came to know about the importance money, how to spend, where to spend and so on. This factor plays a pivotal role in children life. Thirdly, importance of the family, a child learns the importance of parents when he/she is usually far away from home and to overcome such factors assert inner strength and mental stability.
To recapitulate, I will emphasize that one must take boarding school as a boon and not taking it as a bane. For overall development boarding schools are the best.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, while, for instance, such as, in my opinion, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1931.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20485175202 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76496004171 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5525606469 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1298566578 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.6875 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1875 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6875 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197251756659 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585375328487 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769441878756 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107073997725 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068754775875 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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