More houses are needed in many countries to cope with increasing populations.
Would it be better to build houses in existing towns and cities, or to develop new towns in rural areas?
As population is increasing demand for other commodity also rising. town and cities are overcrowded and full of traffic.Therefore, I immenseley support the statement that more house should be build in rural area. In order to elaborate my idea firstly we will discuss the advantage of constructing new accommodation in rural area. Secondly why it is not a good idea to develop more construction in developed phase.
To embark on it, rural area need more attention as compare to urban area. The main advantage is that it will divide the traffic which is one of the major aspect of any nation. For example rural are has less transportation services, thus the transportation in rural area is not good as compare to urban area. if more houses will build , area will grow and also prove helpful for the local area people. Thy can rent out property and earn handsome amount. In such way the area will get improve.
On the other hand, if construction work will continue in developed area it will be a hazardous situation. Foe example existing cities and town are facing an issue like water, traffic and expensive products land. Therefore if more construction work these area will become more crowded. Thus these will also lead more pollution and health issues.
To sum up all, I would agree with the point that governmentshould pay more attention toward the devlopmentof rual area. more construction work should be done in these part. Apart from it these factor will become more beneficial for any notion who is suffering from overcrowded cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, apart from, for example, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96538461538 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83691573669 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6868313984 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9411764706 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2941176471 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290141687864 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913164574296 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690588425581 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178988399198 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574962540434 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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