The table below give information on the proportion of carbohydrate, protein and fat in three different diets. Write a report for a university lectures describing the information shown below comparisons where relevant.
The Proportion of Carbohydrates, Protein and Fat in three different diets.
The pie charts below describe the information of diets and all the proportion to fill. Then, there few explain of comparisons of the three graphics.
These are three graphs of different diets with each proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat. there kinds of diets are average diet, healthy diet and healthy diet for sport.
Start from pie chart of average diet, needed carbohydrates for 40%, 40% protein and 20% fat. For healthy diet required 50% carbohydrates, 30% protein and 20% fat, same with average diet. Last, healthy diet for sport demands more carbohydrates was 60%, 25% protein and 15% fat.
The inference, average diet has same part of carbohydrates and protein. Beside that, there similar among average and healthy diet, the both of its has an equal amount of fat. Every diets involve more carbohydrates, the next necessity must to fulfilled is protein and the least is fat.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
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Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 755.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10135135135 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68503515912 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533783783784 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 13.6488094719 43.030603864 32% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.5 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 5.23603664747 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182614596932 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099642893416 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801864575389 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143337703734 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726163138303 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.36 8.06136585366 79% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 40.7170731707 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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