It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
There are some people who were born with the talents but others are not. it can be a lucky gift for who get that. In some prospectives, people think that children can be good in certain field by teaching. In my opinion, I agree with the statement above.
it can not be refused that some lucky person get the talent since they are born. Every person is a unique form sothat you can be good in this field but get low in others field. No one can get perfect in everything. For example, one football striker can score well but when you put him at the back side, that is not a good idea at all.
For the other side, some people think that aperson can be good in certain field by traning. Invidually, I think that opinion is not wrong. For instance, when I was a child, I have to do math and that is my hobbies. At the beginning, I did not like methemic very much, then, I tried to do mathematic as much as possible that made me to the top in math.
In conclude, I think that it can be good if you were born with the talent but if you are not, do not to be sad and tried to work hard for your goal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, well, for example, for instance, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 3.15609756098 412% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 5.60731707317 535% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 3.98181818182 4.92477711251 81% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09495655688 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4517499835 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.3846153846 112.824112599 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 16.9230769231 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312735200709 0.215688989381 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123189574861 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878482790143 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211300931247 0.15604864568 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510031564713 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 13.2329268293 44% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.51 11.4140731707 48% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.3 8.06136585366 78% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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