The best way for a society to prepare for leadership in government, industry, or any other fields is by instiling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Leadership is the quality of particular one which leads the group of people in either right or wrong direction. Leadership is generally associated with the political science, educational institutions, business as many other fields. Leadership can be effective if one is aware about how to mange the position of leader in the group of people. I agree with the given assertion that best way to prepare young people for leadership is to acknowledge them about unity and team work.
Leadership can be evaluated on the basis of a good or a bad leader. A leader knows how to enlighten the people about different rules and regulations which are novice to group of people. A good leader can be evaluated on the basis of the cooperation with their people and how it manages and give solutions for their problems. Leadership is something that cannot be everyone's cup of tea. It requires a lot of sacrifices and courage to be a good leader. Sometimes leader have to face all the fails outcomes in favour of their people.
Main purpose to evaluate a good leader is one has to be good in every professions and have the basic knowledge about it. The best way to prepare young generation for a great leadership is to instilling them a knowledge about cooperation, team work, unity and many other things which can be effective to be a good and successful leader instead of encouraging them for the competition of leadership. There are many famous, wise and successful leaders which can be the example for young generation in current world. For an example, if we talk about well known leaders in all possible areas were came to this position by hard work and cooperating with the people. Nelson Mandela, Narendra Modi, Barak Obama are one of the best leaders till now. A great leader can lead a nation to the peak point where every people associated with that leadership is benefited with precious variety of things, positions and can compete to the current competitive world.
Leaders are bone marrow for any nation, business or any other educational institutions. Without leaders one nation is like facing anarchy and have some jargon international problems. Sometimes, a leader can lead to the bad or failure of some economical as well as defaming issues. For an example, in India there are many political leaders which are successful but there are some political groups which leads to the bad and failure results of economical issues. Sometimes it happens this people are famous for their notorious activities in society. Due to that reason they get fame in a bad manner and became leader of some evil groups who are willing to do the dangerous activities.
In conclusion, I agree with the given proposition that society have to focus on the educating young generation about the factors of a good leadership like unity, cooperation and etc instead of acknowledging them for competition. For a leader cooperation with the team is done with having mutual understanding towards their members. These factors affect the most to be a good and successful leader in the society in respective fields.
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- The best way for a society to prepare for leadership in government, industry, or any other fields is by instiling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. 50
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: come
...nown leaders in all possible areas were came to this position by hard work and coope...
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...ernational problems. Sometimes, a leader can lead to the bad or failure of some e...
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Suggestion: economic
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...conomical issues. Sometimes it happens this people are famous for their notorious a...
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...ciety. Due to that reason they get fame in a bad manner and became leader of some evil groups w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, well, as to, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 58.6224719101 130% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2571.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 522.0 442.535393258 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92528735632 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77988695657 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77881140764 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.411877394636 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 833.4 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3648284335 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.84 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.88 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.32 5.21951772744 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205616191198 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663906090663 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842795298109 0.0758088955206 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132910311529 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542313476379 0.0667264976115 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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