write a letter to an organizer about the hotel you stayed who booked the hotel for you
meeting details
What you did not like about the hotel
what you want organizer to do
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about the condition of the hotel, where I stayed for an urgent meeting. My company Pakistan telecommunication private limited sent me to turkey for settlement of a project. The meeting was on 23rd of October at the Turkey hotel. I stayed in the hotel from 22nd to 24th of October in Room number 406.
Firstly, from a 5-star hotel you expect high-class service especially when you pay an enormous amount of money for VIP gold package. The Room was quite spacious and well-furnished but when I came back in my room after meeting session was finished I found that air conditioner and refrigerator was not cooling at proper temperature. Room was extremely hot and when I complained about it to staff, they confirmed to investigate the issue. however, nothing was done during the night. Secondly bed sheets were also tattered and had spots on them.
Such kind of experience was extremely frustrating and completely unacceptable from such prestigious hotel. As the arrangement were below standard and pathetic, hence I want you to refund half of my paid amount. I also want to suggest to give training to hotel staff about solving problems of guest on time and strict policies for room service staff to check the condition of room after the room gets vacant. facilities of each room should be thoroughly checked so that new occupant do not encounter the same issue.
Yours faithfully,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 438, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...hey confirmed to investigate the issue. however, nothing was done during the night. Sec...
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Line 7, column 409, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Facilities
...ion of room after the room gets vacant. facilities of each room should be thoroughly check...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, second, secondly, so, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1210.0 937.175257732 129% => OK
No of words: 243.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97942386831 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87519764593 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609053497942 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4075229241 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0769230769 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6923076923 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214441160726 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668830333141 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068734569009 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151476393154 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292763666298 0.0580467560999 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.