New parents should attend parenting courses to ensure the growth of their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
New parents should attend parenting courses to ensure the growth of their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, when the pacing of development vastly acceleration, modern parents forward much more their intention to the inclusive growth of children. Hence, courses guiding the parents' methodology promoting children's ability emerge to response the demand. This essay agrees with the idea that the ability of children can intensively foster if their parents educate them since childhood; therefore their parents, for a future having children with high-qualified primary education should participate in courses guiding how to educate children effectively.
Firstly, in the early years of life, children can quickly absorb new knowledge and brightly awareness almost not affected by wicked thoughts and ideologies, and if it is not rightly informed and educated can lead to unpredictable consequence in the future. In the courses, trainers assist parents active and suitable methods children can comfortably absorb and accumulate, thus, not only can the awareness of children avoid the terrible things, but also more comprehends the human value. With the systematic methodology, trainers, the expertise in the field of children tutoring, bring the parents a new thought, then encourage modern method suitable with revolutionary trends nowadays.
Secondly, new-generation children, before 2010 educated by traditional method mainly concentrating on basic scientific subjects not suitable in the new world with the variety of fields developing to every niche of life, need to enhance up-to-date skills such as critical thinking, logic thinking, grouping. Parents usually force their children to learn by their methods trained from past, consequently, restrict children in old ideologies. This problem can be dealing with when they participate in course, in which all the skills trainers teach them, and then they can apply again with their children. This solution brings their children firmly foundation before shouldering hard problems in life.
In conclusion, it is necessary for parents to take into account course, training them to teach the children. The benefit comes to both parents and children
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1895.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69069069069 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84676448481 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57957957958 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.4247038031 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.357142857 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7857142857 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.436104857302 0.244688304435 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190104974846 0.084324248473 225% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.174987402482 0.0667982634062 262% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.352731570234 0.151304729494 233% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.328113324354 0.056905535591 577% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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