You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to, because you have some problems.
Write a letter to your new employer. In you letter:
Explain your situation
Describe your problems
Tell him/her when you think you can start.
Dear Sir,
I got recruited as finance manager in your organisation having joining date effective 1st august 2019. Firstly, I would like to thank you for extending opportunity to me to work with your esteemed and renowned group. Secondly, I am writing this letter to explain my current obligation, which required me to postpone my joining day by 2 week. I can begin my duties with your group by 15th august.
Being Assistant finance manager, my existing role is full of responsibilities and demand knowledge of historical background of underlying transactions. Further, I have put colossal efforts in audit assignment and managed to finish the audit for last 6 years all together. We are on the verge to accomplish the audit shortly. Due to some unavoidable circumstances on auditor’s part, eventually, audit was delayed by three-week.
considering my separation from company and with the active involvement by management, my line manager managed to cut-short the timelines by 1 weeks on auditor’s part. As a last resort, my company has requested me to extend my service by 2 week to have healthy and mutually beneficial separation, which seems reasonable to me. Lastly, considering unavoidable circumstances, I request you to please revise my joining date to 15th August 2019.
Hope you will consider it positively and extend your wisdom in this matter.
Yours sincerely
Gurmeet Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 337, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
...ired me to postpone my joining day by 2 week. I can begin my duties with your group ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Considering
...ly, audit was delayed by three-week. considering my separation from company and with the...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 245, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
... requested me to extend my service by 2 week to have healthy and mutually beneficial...
^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d extend your wisdom in this matter. Yours sincerely Gurmeet Singh
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, lastly, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33035714286 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1921734447 2.54303337028 126% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647321428571 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9512627053 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8461538462 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182029113151 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699884824849 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641645130051 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127687549441 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791767361737 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 8.71597938144 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 41.2886597938 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.