Everyone should adopt a vegetarian diet because eating meat can cause serious health problems.
Do you agree or disagree?
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It is true that adopting a vegetarian diet could be greatly beneficial in terms of avoiding serious health issues that a meat diet can cause. I partly agree with this view, however, people could otherwise choose to take less meat and add more vegetables to their diet.
On the one hand, a vegetarian diet can have a positive impact on people’s health. People who choose to abstain from meat are known for having a greater life expectancy than those choosing not to. This superiority of longevity of vegetarians have over meat-eaters could be explained by the very nature of animal fats. Particularly, fats derived from animals are more likely than those from plants or fruits to cause arteriosclerosis which leads to premature old age and its following medical problems. Moreover, an excessive intake of meat, especially of high-fat meat, could greatly enhance the levels of stress, or even worse, cause people to be more liable to plunge into depression.
However, conversion into vegetarianism is unnecessary should people can properly alter their diets. Increasing the proportion of </span><span style="font-size: 19.36px;">vegetables in one’s diet while at the same time cutting down on meat is a viable alternative to a complete non-meat diet. By doing this, people are able to enjoy the advantage and enjoyment of a meat diet can offer while helping them less liable to many medical problems associated with it. On the other side, since most people have long been accustomed to taking meat,</span><span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> a complete transition to a non-meat diet are likely to be arduous and challenging. Besides, a vegetarian meal at present which is adequate to the body and pleasing to the palate involves much expense of time and energy, so that a quasi-vegetarian one which does not require a full commitment of meat abstinence could be a more feasible option.
In conclusion, vegetarianism could greatly benefit people's health. However, a scientifically balanced diet which still allows people to eat meat could be preferable to those who cannot give up meat altogether.</span><br></div>
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, moreover, so, still, while, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1858.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4808259587 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.79409061656 2.80592935109 135% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572271386431 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2520000583 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.714285714 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2142857143 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252751161789 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982902798786 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475598729746 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141408901049 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0825336494288 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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