Some people say that it is better to leave children with their grandparents? while others argue parents are better in raising their children? What is your opinion?
In this modern world up-bringing of a offspring is a major concern of parents. There is a fierce debatable issue regarding raising of children by grandparents or by parent themselves. In my opinion, both nurturing should go hand in hand.
On the unitary hand, a host of individuals has a professional commitment as well as grandparents are great source of knowledge. In other words, In this aggressive materialistic era both parent are bread earner of family. There is lack of unoccupied time for their offsprings. Older generation has a lot of qualities which are need of yonger generation such as honesty and hardworking. These traits are raise only under umbrella of grandparents. For instance, I learned honesty and early morning woke up habit from my grandmother. Hence grandparents had indispensable role in one's life.
On the other hand, In this competitive world most of parent are very conscious in relation to nurturing of child as a result of this they believe in their own leadership. To put it into further details, to prepare children for their carrier parent role is undefined and education as well as skills for further development only rise under guidance of parents. Thus only parents is needed for bright future of children.
To conclude, Although some people believe in role of grandparents while other claim their own role is better for Parenting in comparison to grandparents. In my opinion role of parents and grandparents is intertwined with each other and has a importance for overall development of a child.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, regarding, so, thus, well, while, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09881422925 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07889155136 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561264822134 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.3571216757 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279501995219 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839815639075 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790025379884 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170104075989 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769064720935 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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