In Western countries many couples decided not to have any children why? What are advantage and disadvantage?
In this day and age, Family bond is diminishing and people lives life without any responsibilities on shoulders. This essay will answer reasons for this cons and pros of parenting in upcoming paragraph.
The main reason for lack of parenting trait in Western world is because of carefree life habit of population. In other words, men and women love to live a sedentary lifestyle without any burden of duties. Thus, couples generally avoid parent life in their whole life cycle in Western globe
There are lot merits not having any child are more financial backup as compared to people without children. To put it into further details, expense on nurturing as well as on education are saved by solo couples. Therefore, people without offspring are remained more financially strong in their whole life
There are no of demerits, In the future, couples without children denied of emotional and health backbone. In other words, older people will remain solo without any caretaker to connect them emotionally and to get rid of their abnormal health. For instance, In recent survey of Time magzine 53%parents couples without children died by lack of any nominee for care taking. Hence, future of them will be in dark web.
To conclude, Although in Western globe couples decided a carefree life without any offspring, deleterious effects of this step will ruin their older age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09251101322 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56448968556 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5859030837 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.319617922 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.090909091 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6363636364 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155608047153 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597795064617 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562381451574 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091599659551 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410664474207 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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