As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems,the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
The author here argues that as people start relying more on technology,the human ability to think for themselves would deteriorate however I firmly disagree with these argument because eventhough human dependence on technology has increrased,it is only because of the human efforts that technology has advanced these far.
Firstly we need to consider that human is the founder and developer of technology,without constant brain storming and application there cant be advancement in technology.Technology primerarily does the work of reducing the human efforts but there’s a lot of thought process also which goes alongwith these.The best example of these can be internet,it provides human with wide source of information but choice of the information and how to use it solely depends on the human.
Also the reliance on technology has increased because of its availability,since we need to be sure in whatever we do and the technology available there is no harm in using it.I also believe that thinking ability has a lot to do with the education provied.The schools still provide education still in similar fashion with exam based model and there is no help of technology in there,So the necessity of thinking is inherited from childhood.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1051.0 2235.4752809 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 197.0 442.535393258 45% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33502538071 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 4.55969084622 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33701429541 2.79657885939 119% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 215.323595506 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593908629442 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 704.065955056 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 20.2370786517 15% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 23.0359550562 282% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.0721005088 60.3974514979 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 350.333333333 118.986275619 294% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.6666666667 23.4991977007 279% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.0 5.21951772744 287% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262394782314 0.243740707755 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184074245759 0.0831039109588 221% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10756609179 0.0758088955206 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184074245759 0.150359130593 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10756609179 0.0667264976115 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.6 14.1392134831 259% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -11.42 48.8420337079 -23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.92365168539 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.0 12.1743820225 255% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.58 12.1639044944 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.59 8.38706741573 138% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 100.480337079 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 11.8971910112 269% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.0 11.2143820225 250% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.7820224719 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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