Some people say that parents have the most important role in chil's development.however, others argue that things like television or friends have the most significant infulence.discuss bothe views and give your own opinion.
It is no denying that for bright future of children there are many factors ha played the vital role.some experts claim that in the development of child the parents influence the supreme role in the progress of child.Others argue that surrounding atmosphere, friends and some technological gadgets and innovations have the crucial influence in growth of child.so let us examine both views before reaching a concrete decision.
On the one hand, parents are important .Afterall, they are the first teacher and role model of a child. Children learn many social skills from their father and mother. In addition, the atmosphere at home plays a major role in child's character and personality. Also parents have great role in the development a child by providing love, support, security and encouragement from by birth. Apart from this parents are the role model of their child but if parents have the negative habits like smoking, drinking of alcoholic beverages and other bad habit in front of their child. So child also try this. For example, a child can develop his speech from their father and mother. So if father and mother not speak well than it directly impact on the child.
On the other hand, most parents now busy on their jobs so they get to spend only small amount of time with their children. So, many children spend their time on television and get influenced by the programmes run on tv. If children watch scientific programmes or any other programmes which give inspiration and helpful in the skill-development then it is worthfull for growth of child. For example, if It is no denying that for bright future of children there are many factors ha played the vital role.some experts claim that in the development of child the parents influence the supreme role in the progress of child.Others argue that surrounding atmosphere, friends and some technological gadgets and innovations have the crucial influence in growth of child.so let us examine both views before reaching a concrete decision.
On the one hand, parents are important .Afterall, they are the first teacher and role model of a child. Children learn many social skills from their father and mother. In addition, the atmosphere at home plays a major role in child's character and personality. Also parents have great role in the development a child by providing love, support, security and encouragement from by birth. Apart from this parents are the role model of their child but if parents have the negative habbits like smoking, drinking of alcholic beverages and other bad habbit in front of their child. So child also try this. For example, a child can develop his speech from their father and mother. So if father and mother not speak well than it directly impact on the child.
On the other hand, most parents now busy on their jobs so they get to spend only small amount of time with their children. So, many children spend their time on television and get influenced by the programmes run on tv. If children watch scientific programmes or any other programmes which give inspiration and helpful in the skill-development then it is worthful for growth of child. For example, if children learn to the english language, so there are plenty of video clips available on the internet and youtube. Apart from this, friends also has a vital role in the child's development. Friends affect the child in both the positive and negative manner because there may be a good or bad habbits. Because children learn from the friends like attitude and personality by comparing them each other.
In conclusion, in early years of child, the role of parents has more impactful but after that the other environmental factors, friends and technological devices have great role in child's development. So, if both father and mother works, then their child may depends on their friends and television. learn to the english language, so there are plenty of video clips available on the internet and youtube. Apart from this, friends also has a vital role in the child's development. Friends affect the child in both the positive and negative manner because there may be a good or bad habits. Because children learn from the friends like attitude and personality by comparing them each other.
In conclusion, in early years of child, the role of parents has more impactful but after that the other environmental factors, friends and technological devices have great role in child's development. So, if both father and mother works, then their child may depends on their friends and television.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, then, well, apart from, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 42.0 10.4138276553 403% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 102.0 41.998997996 243% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3801.0 1615.20841683 235% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 761.0 315.596192385 241% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99474375821 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.25225936605 4.20363070211 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68518341201 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.250985545335 0.561755894193 45% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1140.3 506.74238477 225% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 4.76152304609 294% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 36.0 16.0721442886 224% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.5813272872 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.583333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1388888889 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13888888889 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 8.67935871743 253% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1760259981 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601584395192 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516472738597 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129432149923 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224912598471 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.44 8.58950901804 75% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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