In recent years, the family has changed as well as family role. Why is this happening and is this positive or negative development?
It can be observed that, nowadays, the structure of the family and the role of the family has changed noticeably. This essay, as my point of view lead to, will elaborated more about the reasons of this situation and I believe that this trend is a good improvement.
There are several reasons behind this issue. The most obvious argue is that, nowadays people are becoming workaholics. To elaborate, due to sophisticated lifestyle, people have to work more time at their job to earn more for enjoying modern amenities. As a result, parents do not have sufficient time to teach their children. They nay find themselves in a dilemma that they neither have enough time to look after children nor have adequate time spare for work.
I consider such development as positive foe several reasons. The first reason is that, children in modern nuclear families could run to be independent at very early stage since they are sent to nursery school in which these preschoolers play and learn to socialize. This also enables their grand parents to enjoy old age more fully they since do not need to take care of their grandchildren. An another reason is that, a double income allow parents in small families to not enjoy only a higher standard of living, but also invest more in their children's education. Consequently, an abundant financial resource is certainly a great support for their offspring to pursue a higher education in the future.
In conclusion, I think the changes occurring to a family's hierarchy and members' responsibilities are a positive step towards a better world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'elaborate'
Suggestion: elaborate
...ssay, as my point of view lead to, will elaborated more about the reasons of this situatio...
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Line 5, column 393, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a reason' or 'another reason'.
Suggestion: A reason; Another reason
...ed to take care of their grandchildren. An another reason is that, a double income allow parents ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, look, so, i think, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96981132075 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78438405915 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607547169811 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3381305705 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.307692308 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197622485511 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730382999585 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766724734214 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146356387903 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101751158842 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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