Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines.Does this Development bring more advantages or disadvantages.
Nobody doubts that we live in a rapidly changing time.The technology become more advanced, So that a lot of household activities now performed by devices, which basically done with hands in past.This new trend have Advantages like saving time and money, however there are some disadvantages also we will discuss in this essay.
On the one side, the positive impact on people to using an advance electronic instruments are following. Firstly, people can do many activities on same time.For example, before an invention of technology like washing machine, many people stick with one work only, as well as spending more time on it, but after the people adopting to work with advanced instrument then, they can save more time and use that time to do more important task. Furthermore, these machine consumes less power because of this people can save time too.
On the other hand, there are negative affects also of new technology. One drawback is related to health problem. To illustrate this, people are become more inactive, if they opt machine work a lot rather than doing by hands, this can lead them to obesity issue. Another downside is unemployment risen. All the people are more rely on machine, low paying jobs are vanished. For instance, nowadays no one give money to a maid for doing house works and consequently this brings difficulty to finding jobs which offers low wage because of modern technology.
In conclusion, in my views; Accessing the new technology of machine aid the people to saves their time also money is more advantages compared to any of minor disadvantages like unhealthy body and unemployment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04074074074 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67152078779 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596296296296 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 100.722677939 49.4020404114 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 123.727272727 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0909090909 7.06120827912 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164562923297 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536678715646 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399789348208 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960462293243 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030549206257 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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