Some people think that schools should involve students in school management.
Do you agree or disagree with this idea? Give reasons for your answer.
Nowadays, whether or not engaging students in the school administration is at the center of attention. While some people might consider it as impractical and dangerous, I explicitly approve that.
On the one hand, some people might find this change problematic for the school and even hazardous to the students. They argue that adolescent students are inexperienced and intrinsically careless at that age; Hence, their contribution would be full of possible blunders, which would bring calamity and chaos to the school. Moreover, when the school is student-governed, bulling by the older and stronger students might get quite rampant, and many students would get harmed physically and emotionally. Thus, they believe the mentioned idea is not practical at all.
On the other hand, I firmly believe this is a brilliant idea and fruitful for both the students and the school for a number of reasons. First of all, the students’ contributions are supervised, so none of the mentioned problems would happen. Secondly, schools are giving the students the chance to learn practical social skills which will help them in their future life and career. As a proof, a study undertaken by Harvard University reveals 78% of Fortune 500 CEOs at least once had the experience of managerial contribution during their childhood either at school or home. Finally, some of the burdens of school management are reduced by the help of students, which can reduce the costs associated. All in all, it is imperative to engage students in school management.
To sum up, although some people wrongly argue students’ participation in school management as troublesome, with direct supervision, it can be quite beneficial for both the students and school with which I do agree.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
Nowadays, whether or not engaging students in the school adminis...
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Line 5, column 591, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...hood either at school or home. Finally, some of the burdens of school management are reduce...
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Line 5, column 778, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o engage students in school management. To sum up, although some people wrongly ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, at least, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28014184397 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05738133124 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556737588652 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9612816478 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.538461538 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327640148506 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120614180189 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743767627081 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212960162042 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518722375527 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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