For many young people today, shopping is their favorite free time. Why do you think this has happened. Should young people be encouraged to do different activities in their free time?
Shopping is gradually becoming the norms among the young people nowadays. It is more or less becoming the favourite way of spending their free time as most shopping malls,supermarkets etc generally boast of young consumers and customers.
This to my understanding, is basically due to the fact that most youth are looking for a way to enjoy themselves in their leisure, coupled with the fact that most don't like a boring life or environment hence the need to frequently go out to catch fun with their friends. In addition to this,most youngsters believed that staying at home and engaging in home activities should be observe by their aging parents or the older generation.
The society we live in has not in any way help matter. There is the creation of different forms of attraction in form of cinemas,amusement parks,relaxation centres etc as a means of generating funds for themselves without putting the young generation into consideration. The attention of the youth in turn are being taken away from the home front, thus discouraging them from spending quality time with their folks who some might even considered boring.
Having said this,it is my opinion that young people be advised to get involve in some other activities in their free time. They can be encouraged to discover their skills and make use of this to their benefit and advantage. In addition to this,they can engage in sports as this will help them to re energize and keep them in good health.
All things considered,young people are to be encouraged to engage in activities that will help to improve their usefulness and contributions to the society thus helping to boost the nation's economy rather than making shopping their best of choice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, so, thus, in addition, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01736111111 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9698828248 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569444444444 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.4776107218 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.363636364 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1818181818 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359761827967 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134677444355 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904888038182 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197241920339 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695315444122 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.