In some countries, small town-center shops are going out of business
because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people
without cars have limited access to out-of-town stores, and this may result in
an increase in the use of cars.
Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages?
It is true that nowadays most people have been interested in shopping in large city shops due to the increasingly displacing of small town-center stores. And I reckon that this trend has both benefits and drawbacks effects.
One the one hand, there are two major drawbacks when people are going to use more cars for shopping.
Firstly, shopping in the larger stores in the city is a considerably time-consuming activity, since people have to travel in a long way to get to these shops, and maybe those could afford things what to want to. Secondly, the more people use private transport, the worst environmental conditions are. To be more specific, cars may release carbon dioxide into the atmosphere, in this way private transport contribute to the global warming of climate change.
On the other hand, the beneficial effects of this trend are more likely to be useful for local residents.
Firstly, there would be a higher demand for employment if more large stores were built in these areas since large shops usually are likely to need more employees. Workers, therefore, may be able to earn money and support their family for the cost of living. Secondly, large modern shops may have a variety of commodities than small shops. It means that occupants who are shoppers have a wide range of choices for them from these shops. For example, Ho Chi Minh City is well-known about huge malls, such as “Vincom Plaza” or “Nguyenkim Electricity Supermarket” that attracting a thousand people to come here on a regular basis to visit and buy things what they would like to afford.
In conclusions, although this trend is not without disadvantages, the upsides will justify these.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a long way" with adverb for "long"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Line 9, column 364, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, therefore, well, for example, i reckon, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06382978723 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83089794942 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599290780142 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4684195027 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.846153846 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8461538462 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172094180375 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640518609356 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700397705606 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919035178758 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075582175448 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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