Some peoplw think that the modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less to sociable.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, technology is being a part of life. There is only few areas where technology is not used. There are some people who declared that the technology has made people more sociable. Whereas some hold a dissenting opinion. This essay will discuss the both points of view before coming to a reasoned conclusion.
On the one hand, there are people who agree that the technology has the way people connect presently. There are number of applications which are available to connect people with each other. The most famous application is Facebook, which provides you a daily updates like, social, politics, sports and so more it connects a billions of people per day. This type of connecting is providing us to facility to connect with thousands of people at the same time in a just click of the button. Therefore, it is rightly said that with method of modern technology the people today are more sociable than earlier.
On the other hand, there is a no doubt that the fact to face interaction are less because of modern technology. The people are using modern means to be connected with others and as a result, it is making them less sociable. The researchers said that the people preferred this modes of connecting to their favourite ones and 90% people had state to just connect with them and know how they are doing. Thus, it is clearly prove that the modern means making us less sociable.
In conclusion, i firmly agree that the present generation is fully dependent on modern technology. The people should interact more with others than via technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, thus, whereas, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84701492537 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55573590821 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526119402985 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.348391448 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1875 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306840958578 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109684685656 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857356837661 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184431357224 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812649683135 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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