Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter:
• Explain why you have gone to live in the new city
• Describe the place where you are living
• Invite your friend to come and see you
Dear Sara,
I hope you're doing well. I’m doing good too. Its been long time I haven't written to you I'm witting to inform you that I have moved to England recently.
I was doing an internship with multinational company the higher management of the company was very satisfied from my work during my internship. However, they have offered me a position of business analyst in one of their branch in England. I was very excited for the offer and accept it. Further, now, I'm sharing an apartment with few local girls they are very kind and supportive. This apartment is only thirty minutes’ drive away from my work, I must mention that I was lucky to find place in this busy area, I have all the require facilities nearby have a very gigantic department store, and few traditional restaurants like Indian and Arabic so I don’t suffer a lot in finding halal food.
In addition, Christmas is approaching near I really want you to come over we can spend some quality time I will be having two long weeks off and your company can really make difference we can planned to visit northern cities of UK. Sara I have to wind up now I am getting late for work. I will look forward to hearing from you.
Yours loving,
Azra Jaan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sara, I hope youre doing well. I'm doing ...
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Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear Sara, I hope youre doing well. I'm doing good too. It...
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Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...;m doing good too. Its been long time I havent written to you Im witting to inform you...
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Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... been long time I havent written to you Im witting to inform you that I have moved...
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Line 5, column 309, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... the offer and accept it. Further, now, Im sharing an apartment with few local gir...
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Line 5, column 534, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ind place in this busy area, I have all the require facilities nearby have a very gigantic ...
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Line 7, column 198, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'planned'.
Suggestion: planned
... can really make difference we can have plan to visit northern cities of UK. Sara I ...
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Line 7, column 310, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...ting late for work. I will look forward to hear from you. Yours loving, Azra Jaan...
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Line 9, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ward to hear from you. Yours loving, Azra Jaan
^^^
Line 10, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... from you. Yours loving, Azra Jaan
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, really, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59641255605 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60194814071 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668161434978 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.8330170772 44.8134815571 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4166666667 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15305401725 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572181358272 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563667663779 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115957548518 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653709147159 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.