Some people think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness.
Do you think people can be happy without much money?
What other factors contribute towards happiness?
Many people consider money as one of the crucial contributor to extend happiness. This essay completely believes that people can live happily even if they don’t have a lot of money and suggests that important aspects in life such as peace of mind and satisfaction are essential for cheerfulness.
It is agreed that availability of lot of money makes life easy to live, but it doesn’t guarantee that wealth will make a person happy. However, it is absolutely possible to live a joyful life even if there is little money. For example, many people prefer to work in their home country on low salaries instead of going to abroad for high-end salaries. As time passes by people can get another opportunity to make millions, but they won’t be able to see their own kids growing up or be with their old parents again when time is gone. The definition of happiness for them is to be closer with their families, kids or loved ones, not a six digit paycheck.
In my opinion, the key factors that drive happiness are the peace of mind and inner satisfaction. If an individual is not happy with himself or with his profession, he would never be able to enjoy anything whatever life offers to him. Therefore, many people choose their profession after careful evaluation of their likings of what brings joy to them. For example, numerous doctors enjoy volunteering for health checkup camps and even perform surgeries without any compensation to achieve peace of mind and satisfaction from their profession. A feeling of giving back to the society is personally satisfying and that too using the skills that they are best at makes them happy.
In conclusion, humans can live happily with less money; inner peace and fulfillment are the essential characteristics that contribute towards contentment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 584, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...A feeling of giving back to the society is personally satisfying and that too using the skills that they...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99337748344 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79613754285 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586092715232 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2993367606 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213103990395 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777937116225 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535203707135 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140259388528 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337165916338 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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