Q you are looking for a part time job at a football club.
Write letter to the manager of the football club.
Introduce your self
What experience and special skills you have
Tell him/her When you think you could start.
Dear sir Paul ,
I am writing this to get a part-time job at your football club if possible. I am 24 years old and student in physical education system at university of arts and science.
My major area of interest in sports is football. I had an experience of coaching in football in sports club center and I have an ability to create a very friendly environment for my trainees so, anybody could not be hesitating to ask anything. But because of my classes schedule in morning I could not continue my work there therefore, I want to join your football club in evening time as a part-time job.
Now days I am preparing myself for exams so, unable to join the football club until I finish my semester. From next month I will be available at anytime for the interview and if you allow me than I can start the coaching from the very first day.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
John Albert
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Dear sir Paul , I am writing this to get a part-time...
^^
Line 12, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you. Yours sincerely, John Albert
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 763.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51479289941 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58334430924 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639053254438 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8414820214 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7777777778 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304151556051 0.216113520407 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109678977274 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720866047352 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173852082585 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00631765711802 0.0580467560999 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.