Some jobs are based at single work place where the hours are the same each day, while other jobs involve frequent travel and irregular working hours
Some occupations require you to work only at one place that you have to the same routine work, whereas other careers which you have to move from place to place with an unbalanced working hours. From my part of views, I think that I prefer travel-working to working at single work place.
Although working at single work place has it own advantages, it also has some drawbacks. First of all you can not feel free and convenient. For example, you will work with another person as the teammate , when it comes to that, there will create too may opinions and it takes a lot of time to deal with. Finally, you are not only stressful but also have to be controlled by the boss.
On the other hand, I am on the side that people should do as a travel-working for some reasons. Firstly, you can explore new things that you have not experienced if you just keep staying at one place. Moreover, you can control over your work. In other words, you can work wherever you want or do anything you want without complaining from others. In addition, you can keep all the profits. For that reason, you can use money to improve and expand your business. Last but not least, you can also have some flexible hours so it is certainly that you can also spend time on your family more,
In conclusion, travel - working and working at the single work place also have it own advantages. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the idea that you should take freelance jobs
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 188, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'hour'?
Suggestion: hour
...ace to place with an unbalanced working hours. From my part of views, I think that I ...
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Line 2, column 46, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'owns'?
Suggestion: owns
...ugh working at single work place has it own advantages, it also has some drawbacks....
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Line 2, column 101, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...it also has some drawbacks. First of all you can not feel free and convenient. Fo...
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Line 2, column 203, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...work with another person as the teammate , when it comes to that, there will creat...
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Line 4, column 83, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'owns'?
Suggestion: owns
...g at the single work place also have it own advantages. In my opinion, I strongly a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, whereas, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4696969697 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39557179056 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537878787879 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0053905614 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2857142857 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8571428571 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255264474678 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105775767724 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105633183705 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207654757872 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887728277676 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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