To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The United States began its history from the eastern part of its territory and gradually expanded to its western part. That’s why the cities in New England show the tradition of early Americans and the cities adjacent to the Pacific reveal the innovation of modern Americans. Therefore, I fully support that one must look into the major cities in order to comprehend certain society.
First of all, major cities have historical sites which enable foreigners to understand the history and narratives of that society. Whenever tourists visit Republic of Korea, for example, they often go to Gyungbok palace and Korea national museum located in Seoul, which is Korea’s capital city. By doing so, foreigners are able to understand Korean tradition and the past of Korean people. Gyungbok palace explains that once Korean society was a dynasty which was governed by king and Korea national museum retains old treasures which show the aesthetic of Korean beauty. Therefore, without the major city like Seoul, it would be much harder to grasp the image and the characteristics of Korean society.
Secondly, the markets in major cities show the lifestyle of that society. Even though the globalization has made us consume similar products all around the world, what people eat and how they get dressed are totally different from society to society. The way we can observe the distinct characteristics of that society is going to the market and see the products presented on the shelves. In European societies, people eat bread a lot, whereas East Asians usually eat rice for their staple food. In addition, the dress code of mannequins also deserves intriguing observation. The city makes it possible to distribute products and form the trend among the locals. This is the apparent reason one should look into the major cities to understand that society.
Lastly, it is much easier to observe the characteristics of one society in major cities because there are lots of people who conform the implicit rules of that society. In Paris, for instance, people often grab the door for others. This is their custom and foreigners can learn it by experiencing the kindness of Parisians many times. But in the rural or suburban area, it is hard to accumulate enough experiences to understand and learn the tacit habits of locals because there are fewer people in those areas than major cities. Hence, it would be even better to comprehend one society in major cities thanks to the abundant population.
In conclusion, I believe that one can truly understand another society by studying its major cities. In major cities, they have many historical sites which allow foreigners to shape the images of that society and understand their origins. Besides, the markets in major cities show the consuming trend of people in that society, which is one of the important characteristics in the society. Foreigners are also able to get to know the implicit rules in one society much easier in major cities because cities have lots of people who can represent those customs. All of these reasons explains why tourists visit Washington D.C. and New York rather than small counties in United States.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 553, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to intrigue'.
Suggestion: to intrigue
... dress code of mannequins also deserves intriguing observation. The city makes it possible...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, if, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2668.0 2235.4752809 119% => OK
No of words: 524.0 442.535393258 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09160305344 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7844588288 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6182148956 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465648854962 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 841.5 704.065955056 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2717300387 60.3974514979 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.72 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.96 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44 5.21951772744 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197406718212 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629305164385 0.0831039109588 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530355020507 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118631390425 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456157081031 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 100.480337079 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.