Is it better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with there parents?
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveals college students to live for away from home then live at home has been one of the prominent topics in contemporary discussion. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain it is better for college students to live for away from home then live at home . I will discuss my viewpoints in upcoming paragraph.
To begin with, students can take food at time in home . They can take healthy diet at home and parents take care of students.Furthermore, then the students live at home the family always supported them and they get better concentration during studies.Moreover, living at home nothing can grow in comfort zone.
On the other hand, when students living stay away from home they can wider with there friends zone. Moreover, then the students living stay away from home they developed making decissions and there thinking ability. They can away from home sickness and anu family problem.
As a case of piont, I am agree with both sides that students can live at home with there parents it means they in protection it can good effect and stay away from home they can grow in friends zone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, moreover, then, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 1207.87684729 85% => OK
No of words: 215.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79534883721 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68146541053 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 139.433497537 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493023255814 0.580463131201 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 325.8 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.716245966 50.4703680194 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.1 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.590327717575 0.242375264174 244% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.281001820086 0.0925447433944 304% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.161630227673 0.071462118173 226% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.394528042728 0.151781067708 260% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725835430648 0.0609392437508 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.32886699507 86% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 55.0591133005 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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