A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter
give contact details for when you are away
give instructions about how to care for your pet
describe other household duties
Hi Anita,
Hope you are doing well. Thanks for accepting the invite to my house in my absence. You don't know how much I am relief after hearing yes from you because I was concern for my cat.
I am traveling to attend a conference in New Delhi from 7th of August to 13th of August and will be staying in hotel Hyatt, Indirapuram. I will be busy whole day in conference and might not be able to pick up your calls but you can leave a text incase I don't answer your calls. I will try to return your call as soon as I get some free time. Kindly feed my cat with handful of biscuits twice a day with milk, in the morning at around 8:00 AM and in the evening anytime after 6:00 PM. You can find cat biscuits in the drawer next to the fridge, on your left and milk inside the fridge.
Also I would like you to take care of my plants in balcony because this is a rainy season so watering them once a day will be enough. You can water them in the morning and that's it. Thanks again for your stay.
I look forward to meeting you soon and then we will have party.
Warm regards
Monika Goswami
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e invite to my house in my absence. You dont know how much I am relief after hearing...
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Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...calls but you can leave a text incase I dont answer your calls. I will try to return...
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Line 5, column 279, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...a text incase I dont answer your calls. I will try to return your call as soon as...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...our left and milk inside the fridge. Also I would like you to take care of my pla...
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Line 7, column 173, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
.... You can water them in the morning and thats it. Thanks again for your stay. I lo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.06451612903 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.98346281601 2.54303337028 78% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608294930876 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.375330548 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8461538462 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6923076923 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23024221144 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845501480073 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663002291926 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13393026706 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357271256409 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 89.08 70.7449484536 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.97 8.71597938144 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.96 7.59969072165 78% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.