A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend.In your lettergive contact details for when you are awaygive instructions about how to care for your petdescribe other household duties

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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend.

In your letter
give contact details for when you are away
give instructions about how to care for your pet
describe other household duties

Hi Anita,

Hope you are doing well. Thanks for accepting the invite to my house in my absence. You don't know how much I am relief after hearing yes from you because I was concern for my cat.

I am traveling to attend a conference in New Delhi from 7th of August to 13th of August and will be staying in hotel Hyatt, Indirapuram. I might not be able to answer your calls since I will be busy whole day in conference. Please don't hesitate to drop a text should have any questions. I will try to return your call as soon as I get some free time. Also feed my cat with handful of biscuits twice a day with milk, in the morning at around 8:00 AM and in the evening anytime after 6:00 PM. You can find cat biscuits in the drawer next to the fridge, on your left and milk inside the fridge.

Although it's a rainy season, still I want you to water my plant once a day because they are in balcony. Thanks again for your stay.

I look forward to meeting you soon and then we will have party.

Warm regards
Monika Goswami

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e invite to my house in my absence. You dont know how much I am relief after hearing...
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Line 5, column 232, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...be busy whole day in conference. Please dont hesitate to drop a text should have any...
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Line 5, column 352, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...r call as soon as I get some free time. Also feed my cat with handful of biscuits tw...
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Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...and milk inside the fridge. Although its a rainy season, still I want you to wat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, still, then, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.16582914573 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1009592925 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633165829146 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5319674386 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.7692307692 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3076923077 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205036100934 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073072546673 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659785026565 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124026831288 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352681898841 0.0580467560999 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.31 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.13 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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